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2009-12-10, 09:25 AM | #1 |
Heh Heh Heh! Lisa! Vampires are make believe, just like elves and gremlins and eskimos!
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Need some feedback on new tour
Hi everyone
I've been working on a new tour and would appreciate some valuable feedback Thanks |
2009-12-10, 10:38 AM | #2 |
Me fail English? That's unpossible!
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Overall that tour looks damn good in my opinion. Here are some slight, perhaps anal, suggestions.
Header is great and catches my attention. However girl on left isn't very attractive imo. Other 3 are very fine. How many surfers know what bitrate means? I might change it to 'transfer rates up to 8000 kbps' 'Updates twice a week or more' to 'Multiple updates each and every week' Under site stats, what does 'bonus videos' actually mean? There's got to be a better way to state whatever it is. 'Number of models' change to 'Number of beautiful teen girls'. Change 'Site size' to 'Downloadable Content'. Grammar check the text under 'Welcome to 18CloseUp' Under Claire's entry, the first 4 small thumbnails are the same. OMG spell and grammar check her text entry as well. |
2009-12-10, 05:47 PM | #3 |
They have the Internet on computers, now?
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Is it me or does it look like all that pussy is jumping off the screen. I was over here dodging squirt juice...lol
Looks good besides the couple of grammar errors that howlingwulf mentioned. |
2009-12-11, 03:35 AM | #4 |
Heh Heh Heh! Lisa! Vampires are make believe, just like elves and gremlins and eskimos!
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thanks HowlingWolf, appreciated
I changed the girl on left as you suggested. removed transfer rates and changed "bonus videos" for "DVD quality videos" grammar errors checked as far as I can tell I didn't put 'Number of beautiful teen girls' because it's too subjective and some surfers wouldn't agree after checking the base the first 4 small thumbnails in claire's video are just temporary (there will be 4 extreme closeups there) as for the text there Any other ideas, anyone? |
2009-12-11, 04:49 AM | #5 |
If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English
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looks good, the surfer will like it :-)
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2009-12-15, 04:28 PM | #6 |
Heh Heh Heh! Lisa! Vampires are make believe, just like elves and gremlins and eskimos!
Join Date: Mar 2008
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I just uploaded the new tour... Can anyone check it out and see if there's no major bug?
http://www.18closeup.com/main.htm I've checked it with IE7 and FF3.5 There are only 2 flash teasers working at the moment: cindy on main page (bottom) and claire on tour page 1 (bottom). The iPhone Teaser hasn't been uploaded too. Any help is much appreciated Thanks |
2009-12-16, 11:13 AM | #7 |
Me fail English? That's unpossible!
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Seems fine. Will this replace the current tour or be an alternate? Site seems a little slow today though.
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2009-12-16, 02:01 PM | #8 | |
Heh Heh Heh! Lisa! Vampires are make believe, just like elves and gremlins and eskimos!
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About the site speed, yes, I'm working on it. I still have to figure out if it's related to the line capacity, processor speed or available memory... |
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2009-12-16, 05:06 PM | #9 |
Me fail English? That's unpossible!
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Now I have to go change all the pages I made to match and promote your site.
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2009-12-16, 05:12 PM | #10 |
Heh Heh Heh! Lisa! Vampires are make believe, just like elves and gremlins and eskimos!
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Sorry to hear that
Let me know if you need anything... |
2009-12-16, 05:19 PM | #11 |
wtfwjd?
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I noticed the slowness too...also the recips on the links page look off center, like a table that is right justified instead of centered.
Looks good though, I like the pussy-in-your-face effect. |
2009-12-16, 05:25 PM | #12 |
Heh Heh Heh! Lisa! Vampires are make believe, just like elves and gremlins and eskimos!
Join Date: Mar 2008
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thx for the feedback, LD.
Was it slow for downloading the teaser, for embedded flash vids, for loading pages or all the above? What was your d/l speed? |
2009-12-17, 12:28 PM | #13 |
Heh Heh Heh! Lisa! Vampires are make believe, just like elves and gremlins and eskimos!
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Ok, I doubled the line speed (>50Mb/s). It looks ok now...
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