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Toby · 2011-02-21, 09:26 PM

Not bad really. I'd make the thumbs larger. 140x210 would make a row of five about the same width as the banners.

The last line of text isn't bad, but the two lines of MEMBERSHIP REQUIRED are rather passive. I'd change them to something that is more of a call to action and expresses some sense of urgency. For example, add the word NOW! after CLICK HERE on the line at the bottom. Two more similar lines of sales text to replace the passive ones and you're set.

2011-02-21, 09:26 PM	#2
Toby Lonewolf Internet Sales Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Houston Posts: 4,826	Not bad really. I'd make the thumbs larger. 140x210 would make a row of five about the same width as the banners. The last line of text isn't bad, but the two lines of MEMBERSHIP REQUIRED are rather passive. I'd change them to something that is more of a call to action and expresses some sense of urgency. For example, add the word NOW! after CLICK HERE on the line at the bottom. Two more similar lines of sales text to replace the passive ones and you're set. __________________ Latex Vixens Babes In Boots Well Heeled Women Dressing For Sex Stocking Vixens