im open for critiquing, or however u spell it

[Joe]

You have way too many thumbs on your gallery. A gallery usually has about 15 larger-sized thumbnails that lead to the higher-quality pics.

Also, your advertising is meek and mild. The first gallery at the top only has a boring banner ad and a non-enticing text link at the bottom.

Try to bring a more attractive and attentive advertising creative to the surfer's eyes. Use enticing and sexy text to lure them in.