Need Review

Briskit · 2005-04-15, 07:32 PM

http://4hotxxx.com/3-29-05/free-teen-xxx/

Thanks Briskit

swedguy · 2005-04-15, 07:51 PM

It's nice and clean and should get listed at most places.

But the first ad on the index page, would you read it?

I wouldn't. It's a huge block of text with nothing that catches my eye.
You might want to shorten it down a little bit or accentuate certain parts or add some air or add different colors.... or make use of all of them

Greenguy · 2005-04-15, 09:57 PM

It scrolls over 800 for me & I agree with swedguy that the ad on top is not that noticable (I thought it was more warning text when I saw it)

swedguy · 2005-04-15, 10:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Greenguy

It scrolls over 800 for me

That's what I get for being lazy and not turn on my 800x600 monitor

Briskit · 2005-04-16, 02:03 AM

Ok cool thanks for the advice anyone else have anything

Thanks Briskit

Rocco · 2005-04-18, 03:48 AM

looks fine to me...but don't overuse your template

Roby · 2005-04-18, 10:57 AM

i think it is nice...

Sir Horny · 2005-04-18, 11:58 PM

You may want to hide your sponsor link info as well. Here is the code to do so:

<a onmouseover="window.status='http://www.SiteThatWillDisplay.com/';return true;" onfocus="window.status='http://www.SiteThatWillDisplay.com/';return true;" onmouseout="self.status=''" href="http://sponsorlinkcode-goes-here"> <a/>

Man I'm bagged - time to catch some zzzzz.

BigVikingAl · 2005-05-04, 09:22 PM

Not a bad design. Should have no problems getting listed. Some LL's don't let you hide the sponsor code though.

2005-04-15, 07:32 PM	#1
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2005-04-15, 09:57 PM	#3
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2005-04-18, 03:48 AM	#6
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2005-05-04, 09:22 PM	#9
BigVikingAl They have the Internet on computers, now? Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 148	Not a bad design. Should have no problems getting listed. Some LL's don't let you hide the sponsor code though. __________________ MrPornReview/throat-gaggers In depth deepthroat site reviews

2005-04-15, 07:51 PM	#2
swedguy Vagabond Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 2,374	It's nice and clean and should get listed at most places. But the first ad on the index page, would you read it? I wouldn't. It's a huge block of text with nothing that catches my eye. You might want to shorten it down a little bit or accentuate certain parts or add some air or add different colors.... or make use of all of them

2005-04-16, 02:03 AM	#5
Briskit A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one! Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Texas Posts: 53	Ok cool thanks for the advice anyone else have anything Thanks Briskit

2005-04-18, 10:57 AM	#7
Roby Banned Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 190	i think it is nice...

2005-04-18, 11:58 PM	#8
Sir Horny Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 28	You may want to hide your sponsor link info as well. Here is the code to do so: <a onmouseover="window.status='http://www.SiteThatWillDisplay.com/';return true;" onfocus="window.status='http://www.SiteThatWillDisplay.com/';return true;" onmouseout="self.status=''" href="http://sponsorlinkcode-goes-here"> <a/> Man I'm bagged - time to catch some zzzzz.