Opinions about my first hub

[Magnoody]

Originally Posted by NochexContact

http://www.smithsmedia.co.uk/GG/

I had a play see what you think, I think you need to work on some more text, if cant do it get the sponsor to sort it out, if they wont find another sponsor :-)

oh thanks for taking the time rebuilding this for me |king| was very kind of you
I have built the page then removed some banners and pics and this is why there are some meaningless sentences.
I'm going to go through it again to change whats wrong but this would be after a month because of my fucking exams |shocking|
thanks again bud