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ronnie · 2005-05-16, 03:31 PM

On your index you have "Do you want to fuck today? Click here" , it's a blind link. Bare minimum, put in the sponsors name. index2 , you have "looking for a date? Just Sex? [See here how to get one]", again a blind link, your not letting them know where they are going, plus the sentence does'nt make sense. Same on the other pages you use the same text. I am guessing english is not your first language? Pardon me if it is. Alot of the english is off, does'nt make sense, bad grammer.

If I was you, I'd work on the text, it's not to bad, but could be a little more exciting, or stimulating. Or try it like it is and see how it works. Did'nt give me a urge to click.

ronnie

2005-05-16, 03:31 PM	#1
ronnie Wheither you think you can or you think you can't, Your right. Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: midwest Posts: 2,274	On your index you have "Do you want to fuck today? Click here" , it's a blind link. Bare minimum, put in the sponsors name. index2 , you have "looking for a date? Just Sex? [See here how to get one]", again a blind link, your not letting them know where they are going, plus the sentence does'nt make sense. Same on the other pages you use the same text. I am guessing english is not your first language? Pardon me if it is. Alot of the english is off, does'nt make sense, bad grammer. If I was you, I'd work on the text, it's not to bad, but could be a little more exciting, or stimulating. Or try it like it is and see how it works. Did'nt give me a urge to click. ronnie