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Stever · 2005-05-18, 02:37 AM

O.K. Here is the updated site

All Girl Strap-on Gang Bang

So I removed the header promo graphics and they dont look so much like FHG's now.

I changed the content on the first gallery to a photo set that was a little better quality. They are vid clip shots but the first set was just too blurry. Would these be o.k.?

Still need to crop the thumbs on second gallery to remove site logo.

I think I'll keep the 2 pic galleries/1 vid gallery set-up for submitting to some sites. And make a seperate one with two vid galleries for others. Or even just the two pic galleries for some that will accept them.

Any other comments while I work on SEO for now.

Stever · 2005-05-18, 03:54 AM

Any one care to comment on the text on these pages. I attempted to punch it up a bit after finding out my sales text was weak on previous tgp galleries. I find this much better but is it too much, am i over selling or is it good?

Lemmy · 2005-05-18, 06:09 AM

I don't think you're overdoing it at all. On the contrary I think you could do more.

Your index page has no advertising at all. You're allowed 3 links, so use them. Also I would make the linked text a different color. Where it is part of a block of unlinked texts it sort of drowns. Make it stand out more.

Other than that your site looks great. I have no problems with it.

Useless · 2005-05-18, 07:42 AM

The very first thing that you'll want to do is to yank the counter from the bottom of your pages. Third party counters and Javascript are not allowed on free sites at most places. I used to love my counters.

Plus, I have some good news and some bad news. The good news is that you don't have to worry about your movies burning too much bandwidth. The bad news is that your movies won't burn too much bandwidth because the big link lists don't accept those vid caps. We smaller and newer link lists still take them, generally speaking.

Your 460x80 banner is hotlinked from Girlygangbang. They may allow it, but some prickly reviewers may not. It's a toss up.

Otherwise, the site is clean; your enter and gallery links are obvious and easy to locate, as they should be.

2005-05-18, 02:37 AM	#1
Stever Ahhh ... sweet pity. Where would my love life be without it? Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: British Columbia, Canada Posts: 208	O.K. Here is the updated site All Girl Strap-on Gang Bang So I removed the header promo graphics and they dont look so much like FHG's now. I changed the content on the first gallery to a photo set that was a little better quality. They are vid clip shots but the first set was just too blurry. Would these be o.k.? Still need to crop the thumbs on second gallery to remove site logo. I think I'll keep the 2 pic galleries/1 vid gallery set-up for submitting to some sites. And make a seperate one with two vid galleries for others. Or even just the two pic galleries for some that will accept them. Any other comments while I work on SEO for now. __________________ <a href="http://www.fioramall.com/click/sponsor.php?kw_userid=Stever"><img src="http://www.steverslinks.com/images/fiora.gif"</a>

2005-05-18, 03:54 AM	#2
Stever Ahhh ... sweet pity. Where would my love life be without it? Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: British Columbia, Canada Posts: 208	Any one care to comment on the text on these pages. I attempted to punch it up a bit after finding out my sales text was weak on previous tgp galleries. I find this much better but is it too much, am i over selling or is it good? __________________ <a href="http://www.fioramall.com/click/sponsor.php?kw_userid=Stever"><img src="http://www.steverslinks.com/images/fiora.gif"</a>

2005-05-18, 06:09 AM	#3
Lemmy You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Next door to a kid with a moped. Posts: 1,492	I don't think you're overdoing it at all. On the contrary I think you could do more. Your index page has no advertising at all. You're allowed 3 links, so use them. Also I would make the linked text a different color. Where it is part of a block of unlinked texts it sort of drowns. Make it stand out more. Other than that your site looks great. I have no problems with it. __________________ BUY MY PORNSITES!

2005-05-18, 07:42 AM	#4
Useless Certified Nice Person Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Dirty Undies, NY Posts: 11,268	The very first thing that you'll want to do is to yank the counter from the bottom of your pages. Third party counters and Javascript are not allowed on free sites at most places. I used to love my counters. Plus, I have some good news and some bad news. The good news is that you don't have to worry about your movies burning too much bandwidth. The bad news is that your movies won't burn too much bandwidth because the big link lists don't accept those vid caps. We smaller and newer link lists still take them, generally speaking. Your 460x80 banner is hotlinked from Girlygangbang. They may allow it, but some prickly reviewers may not. It's a toss up. Otherwise, the site is clean; your enter and gallery links are obvious and easy to locate, as they should be. __________________ Click here to purchase a bridge I'm selling.