Review my Senior hub

MeatPounder · 2003-11-17, 12:15 AM

Hi all

Just did some updating on my Senior Frolics hub page.

http://www.seniorfrolics.net

I would appreciate any suggestions and advice from the pros here.

Especially as several of you have your link lists posted on it.

Thanks in advance

Fisty Palmer · 2003-11-17, 04:27 AM

Perhaps it's just my monitor, but the color of your text/background is a bit jarring. It's hard to read, and causes some eye-strain.

Fisty
|rasta|

Fonz · 2003-11-17, 06:23 PM

Yupz,

Red on blue is always hard to read, changing the background into a darker shade of blue and the red text into a lighter color (white, yellow) would be much better.

MeatPounder · 2003-11-17, 08:01 PM

Thanks for the comments

I've actually changed the font to a more friendly verdana,.
I went the other way on the color scheme though, actually making the background much lighter and the font bolder and darker....I've run it through several versions of netscape, one opera and of course 3 IE's.

I've looked at it on my 21" Trinitron, my 19" lcd, My 15" laptop and even the old 17" on my server and the 15" on the print server...Seems to me to be ok now.

Could you guys look at it now?
Also any rec's on the design and flow?

Rorschach · 2003-11-18, 07:19 AM

You need way more differentiation and structure between the different components of the page so I can find exactly what I'm looking for, think colours, fonts, tables, borders. Put some descriptive sales text above/ beneath each banner, or better yet, make custom table ads. You also have some html and linking code errors (eg. the text link to grammacash has an extra space in it and it going to a 404).

MeatPounder · 2003-11-18, 10:43 PM

Thanks...all in bordered tables now, and fixed those html errors...hmm..I had done a complete test on it, but with all the changes somehow I got the %20 added to 11 of the links....the link above now goes to the default warning page, but if you want to look directly it is
http://seniorfrolics.net/index.html

2003-11-17, 12:15 AM	#1
MeatPounder Women might be able to fake orgasms But men can fake whole relationships Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Fort Lauderdale, Fl Posts: 2,408	Review my Senior hub Hi all Just did some updating on my Senior Frolics hub page. http://www.seniorfrolics.net I would appreciate any suggestions and advice from the pros here. Especially as several of you have your link lists posted on it. Thanks in advance

2003-11-17, 06:23 PM	#3
Fonz Former pr0n slinger. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Antwerp, Belgium Posts: 7,932	Yupz, Red on blue is always hard to read, changing the background into a darker shade of blue and the red text into a lighter color (white, yellow) would be much better. __________________ See how I abuse little trees on my Shumi no Bonsai Blog

2003-11-17, 08:01 PM	#4
MeatPounder Women might be able to fake orgasms But men can fake whole relationships Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Fort Lauderdale, Fl Posts: 2,408	Thanks for the comments I've actually changed the font to a more friendly verdana,. I went the other way on the color scheme though, actually making the background much lighter and the font bolder and darker....I've run it through several versions of netscape, one opera and of course 3 IE's. I've looked at it on my 21" Trinitron, my 19" lcd, My 15" laptop and even the old 17" on my server and the 15" on the print server...Seems to me to be ok now. Could you guys look at it now? Also any rec's on the design and flow? Last edited by MeatPounder; 2003-11-18 at 12:52 AM..

2003-11-17, 04:27 AM	#2
Fisty Palmer Lord help me, I'm just not that bright Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: The Left Coast Posts: 104	Perhaps it's just my monitor, but the color of your text/background is a bit jarring. It's hard to read, and causes some eye-strain. Fisty \|rasta\|

2003-11-18, 07:19 AM	#5
Rorschach Shut up brain, or I'll stab you with a Q-tip! Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 115	You need way more differentiation and structure between the different components of the page so I can find exactly what I'm looking for, think colours, fonts, tables, borders. Put some descriptive sales text above/ beneath each banner, or better yet, make custom table ads. You also have some html and linking code errors (eg. the text link to grammacash has an extra space in it and it going to a 404).

2003-11-18, 10:43 PM	#6
MeatPounder Women might be able to fake orgasms But men can fake whole relationships Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Fort Lauderdale, Fl Posts: 2,408	Thanks...all in bordered tables now, and fixed those html errors...hmm..I had done a complete test on it, but with all the changes somehow I got the %20 added to 11 of the links....the link above now goes to the default warning page, but if you want to look directly it is http://seniorfrolics.net/index.html