Gimmie some feedback on this free site

Wild_Unicorn · 2006-02-19, 10:23 PM

Swap the pics with non-sponsor ones and you will get listed at far more places.

Far more link sites are getting fussier over what they will list and what they wont. Most wont accept sponsor content.

Halfdeck · 2006-02-20, 06:25 AM

Your pictures are too bland imo. If they're sponsor content, I'd replace them with something a little more exciting.

The thumbs look muddy. You can make 'em look better without increasing their filesizes much.

Since this is an APC site you're promoting, it'd be a little more surfer friendly if you used a mouseover that displayed the paysite domain in the stats bar instead of apc.com. Up to you.

Last thing -- your site doesn't pass the Roman Maroni test:

"Hi there my names Jen Padova." Hi there (, or .) My name is

Problem is I'm such messy girl that I end up with spit all over little titties. --> Problem is I'm such a messy girl that I end up with spit all over my little titties

You like that... --> You like that?

So, I see your still here. --> I see you're

Have you been searching net looking for that something extra? --> searching THE NET

Well inside Throatjobs.com theres tens of fresh faced amateurs --> there's. Also, Well inside is a run-on. Rewrite it to Well, inside

Good luck

2006-02-19, 10:23 PM	#1
Wild_Unicorn I want to set the record straight - I thought the cop was a prostitute Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: London Posts: 296	Swap the pics with non-sponsor ones and you will get listed at far more places. Far more link sites are getting fussier over what they will list and what they wont. Most wont accept sponsor content. __________________ GET YOURSELF SOME CHEAP CONTENT EDGE CONTENT - BARGAIN SETS UNDER $5

2006-02-20, 06:25 AM	#2
Halfdeck You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: New Haven, CT Posts: 985	Your pictures are too bland imo. If they're sponsor content, I'd replace them with something a little more exciting. The thumbs look muddy. You can make 'em look better without increasing their filesizes much. Since this is an APC site you're promoting, it'd be a little more surfer friendly if you used a mouseover that displayed the paysite domain in the stats bar instead of apc.com. Up to you. Last thing -- your site doesn't pass the Roman Maroni test: "Hi there my names Jen Padova." Hi there (, or .) My name is Problem is I'm such messy girl that I end up with spit all over little titties. --> Problem is I'm such a messy girl that I end up with spit all over my little titties You like that... --> You like that? So, I see your still here. --> I see you're Have you been searching net looking for that something extra? --> searching THE NET Well inside Throatjobs.com theres tens of fresh faced amateurs --> there's. Also, Well inside is a run-on. Rewrite it to Well, inside Good luck __________________ Success is going from failure to failure without a loss of enthusiasm. Last edited by Halfdeck; 2006-02-20 at 06:32 AM..