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2006-03-17, 04:02 AM
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A boy without mischief is like a bowling ball without a liquid center
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: clevel.......don't make me say it!
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 At the last second I thought just to be on the safe side I better see what you guys think and decided to post it(good thing).I only submitted this page,no duplicates so Hopefully I can make it past round one without getting knocked out,but if it happens it happens. I FOCKED OP! |
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2006-03-17, 09:36 AM
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You can now put whatever you want in this space :)
Join Date: Oct 2004
Location: New Haven, CT
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As I mentioned before, using paysite name for your free site title will get you rejected by some reviewers.
"Enter The Free Galleries" is roman maroni (defies English grammar). "The free galleries" is implying there's only ONE free gallery from a reader's point of view, which just doesn't make sense because there are a crapload of free galleries out there on the net. Also, try not to use the word "free" too freely... http://www.dickheadshit.com/images/busty10.jpg <--- This thumb doesn't correspond with the big pic I'm seeing. In fact, I see the same thumbnail dead center on gallery 2. Personally, I don't like how you laid out your recip table either; the recips look squished together and should be spaced out more evenly. I'd also remove banners to other sites from your sponsor and just focus on one paysite. Right now it feels like you're promoting MacDonalds and Wendys with one commercial. EDIT: And next time, please ask for a review before you actually submit. Otherwise we're all wasting our breath 
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2006-03-17, 11:04 AM
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Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs!
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Sunny Florida!
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Hey there Star Man...I sent you a PM about this site when I reviewed it last night.
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