Quick review please

Halfdeck · 2006-03-17, 09:36 AM

As I mentioned before, using paysite name for your free site title will get you rejected by some reviewers.

"Enter The Free Galleries" is roman maroni (defies English grammar). "The free galleries" is implying there's only ONE free gallery from a reader's point of view, which just doesn't make sense because there are a crapload of free galleries out there on the net.

Also, try not to use the word "free" too freely...

http://www.dickheadshit.com/images/busty10.jpg <--- This thumb doesn't correspond with the big pic I'm seeing. In fact, I see the same thumbnail dead center on gallery 2.

Personally, I don't like how you laid out your recip table either; the recips look squished together and should be spaced out more evenly.

I'd also remove banners to other sites from your sponsor and just focus on one paysite. Right now it feels like you're promoting MacDonalds and Wendys with one commercial.

EDIT: And next time, please ask for a review before you actually submit. Otherwise we're all wasting our breath

2006-03-17, 09:36 AM	#6
Halfdeck You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: New Haven, CT Posts: 985	As I mentioned before, using paysite name for your free site title will get you rejected by some reviewers. "Enter The Free Galleries" is roman maroni (defies English grammar). "The free galleries" is implying there's only ONE free gallery from a reader's point of view, which just doesn't make sense because there are a crapload of free galleries out there on the net. Also, try not to use the word "free" too freely... http://www.dickheadshit.com/images/busty10.jpg <--- This thumb doesn't correspond with the big pic I'm seeing. In fact, I see the same thumbnail dead center on gallery 2. Personally, I don't like how you laid out your recip table either; the recips look squished together and should be spaced out more evenly. I'd also remove banners to other sites from your sponsor and just focus on one paysite. Right now it feels like you're promoting MacDonalds and Wendys with one commercial. EDIT: And next time, please ask for a review before you actually submit. Otherwise we're all wasting our breath __________________ Success is going from failure to failure without a loss of enthusiasm.