Need feedback on first freesite

ieatjackets · 2006-07-30, 05:46 PM

Hey guys I'm new to this forum though I'm not entirely new to the adult industry.

Anyway, I just built my first freesite and before I make the plunge and submit, I'd like to get some feedback on it. Any and all comments would be appreciated, as I'm just a total newbie when it comes to freesites.

http://hornyfrank.com/free/babe-deepthroats-dick/

Preacher · 2006-07-30, 06:04 PM

Hi, welcome.

Index:
Way too much linked text in that ad box. Many lists say they accept up to 3 lines of linked text.
I'd take Tommy's recip off as you need a submitters account to get listed there and if you are new you most likely do not have one.

Main:
Looks good to me.

Galleries:
Too much linked text again.
Some of those pictures are kinda blurry.
Some of the pictures appear to be over 100K. A few linklists want them under 80, most want them under 100k.

Other then that, it looks really good.

ieatjackets · 2006-07-30, 07:32 PM

Thank you so much for your comments!

I updated the gallery quite a bit; I changed the title, added new thumbs and new pics, and made the changes to the links like you said. I think it's pretty good, and I'm going to try a submit and see what happens.

If anyone else has any comments to add, I'm still and always ready to accept constructive criticism!

New url: http://hornyfrank.com/free/she-loves-deepthroat/

Lemmy · 2006-07-30, 10:59 PM

I didn't see the first attempt, but I don't have any issues with the way it is now. Looks good!

ieatjackets · 2006-07-30, 11:02 PM

Great, I'm glad to hear it!

On a side note, is it a good idea to put META tags? Do they help with building PR and all that good stuff?

Fonz · 2006-07-31, 07:38 AM

META tags aren't going to influence your PR (I think).
But they are good for your SE ranking and stuff, at least if they're relevant to what's on your site. I would certainly add them to every page you build.

bur-ak · 2006-07-31, 10:54 AM

"OOOPS! Page not found"

Preacher · 2006-07-31, 12:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ieatjackets

If anyone else has any comments to add, I'm still and always ready to accept constructive criticism!

New url: http://hornyfrank.com/free/she-loves-deepthroat/

Hmm, can't recall if this was on the first site and I just missed it, but some Linklists have a rule against hardcore on the index/warning page.

ieatjackets · 2006-07-31, 04:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bur-ak

"OOOPS! Page not found"

Check the third post. I wish I could edit my first post but apparently not...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Preacher

Hmm, can't recall if this was on the first site and I just missed it, but some Linklists have a rule against hardcore on the index/warning page.

Ahh, yeah, it was. Alright well thank you I'll keep that in mind.

Thanks everyone for your continued feedback.

2006-07-30, 05:46 PM	#1
ieatjackets If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 33	Need feedback on first freesite Hey guys I'm new to this forum though I'm not entirely new to the adult industry. Anyway, I just built my first freesite and before I make the plunge and submit, I'd like to get some feedback on it. Any and all comments would be appreciated, as I'm just a total newbie when it comes to freesites. http://hornyfrank.com/free/babe-deepthroats-dick/

2006-07-30, 06:04 PM	#2
Preacher There's Xanax in my thurible! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Wherever they screw on my head Posts: 2,441	Hi, welcome. Index: Way too much linked text in that ad box. Many lists say they accept up to 3 lines of linked text. I'd take Tommy's recip off as you need a submitters account to get listed there and if you are new you most likely do not have one. Main: Looks good to me. Galleries: Too much linked text again. Some of those pictures are kinda blurry. Some of the pictures appear to be over 100K. A few linklists want them under 80, most want them under 100k. Other then that, it looks really good. __________________ NSCash * This Depraved World

2006-07-30, 07:32 PM	#3
ieatjackets If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 33	Thank you so much for your comments! I updated the gallery quite a bit; I changed the title, added new thumbs and new pics, and made the changes to the links like you said. I think it's pretty good, and I'm going to try a submit and see what happens. If anyone else has any comments to add, I'm still and always ready to accept constructive criticism! New url: http://hornyfrank.com/free/she-loves-deepthroat/ Last edited by ieatjackets; 2006-07-30 at 07:58 PM..

2006-07-30, 10:59 PM	#4
Lemmy You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Next door to a kid with a moped. Posts: 1,492	I didn't see the first attempt, but I don't have any issues with the way it is now. Looks good! __________________ BUY MY PORNSITES!

2006-07-31, 07:38 AM	#6
Fonz Former pr0n slinger. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Antwerp, Belgium Posts: 7,932	META tags aren't going to influence your PR (I think). But they are good for your SE ranking and stuff, at least if they're relevant to what's on your site. I would certainly add them to every page you build. __________________ See how I abuse little trees on my Shumi no Bonsai Blog

2006-07-30, 11:02 PM	#5
ieatjackets If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 33	Great, I'm glad to hear it! On a side note, is it a good idea to put META tags? Do they help with building PR and all that good stuff?

2006-07-31, 10:54 AM	#7
bur-ak Shut up brain, or I'll stab you with a Q-tip! Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 112	"OOOPS! Page not found"