Round 2: How are the revised freesites

[SheepGuy]

They're pretty good and I'll use them, but the titles don't really grab me.
"My Red Dress", "My Black Bikini", if I put them in my kinky cat with those titles nobody will know what the fetish is.
I can always change that though, put the title as "My Smoking Red Dress" or "Smoking Hot Black Bikini". I don't use descriptions on my LL so I'm a little, or maybe a lot different

Nice designs though, and I'll use them.

[Greenguy]

Originally Posted by SheepGuy

They're pretty good and I'll use them, but the titles don't really grab me.
"My Red Dress", "My Black Bikini", if I put them in my kinky cat with those titles nobody will know what the fetish is.
I can always change that though, put the title as "My Smoking Red Dress" or "Smoking Hot Black Bikini". I don't use descriptions on my LL so I'm a little, or maybe a lot different ...

I was gonna mention that, but I was happy that Kenny got them to not have the girls name

Yes, the titles could have more references to the content - smoking, smoke, puff, cigs, etc - just don't go nuts & title 5 of them "Smoking....." because I know when I go to a Link List & the sites are listed in alphabetical order, if I see a lot of sites on the same domain with the same 1st word in the title, I tend to skip past them.

This is where you could actually use the model's name.
Claire Has A Puff
Hot Monica Really Is Smoking
Naked Janet Enjoys A Menthol
etc.