Please review my first FreeSite and...

oldbrad · 2007-04-19, 02:48 AM

First off, it's pretty nice looking

A couple things though. First, you want to make sure to fix the spelling and grammar errors like "A blondes getting their asses fucked hard by huge dicks" should be a blondes getting her ass fucked by a hard huge dick. I think its just one guy and one girl in both galleries.

Second, the girl is a brunette and it says blonde everywhere, so you should say brunette. You also should change the title and keywords on each page instead of the same one throughout. Get you a lil se some some.

The site looks really good though, i like the design, just need a few tweaks.

Grammar. Different title/header. Change blondes to brunettes. If you want you could ad a mouseover to the ads to show the site url only, but whatever you want with that.

I'd list it at Foxys with those couple tweaks

Brad

2007-04-19, 02:48 AM	#2
oldbrad It is better to watch things then to do them Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: oregon Posts: 485	First off, it's pretty nice looking A couple things though. First, you want to make sure to fix the spelling and grammar errors like "A blondes getting their asses fucked hard by huge dicks" should be a blondes getting her ass fucked by a hard huge dick. I think its just one guy and one girl in both galleries. Second, the girl is a brunette and it says blonde everywhere, so you should say brunette. You also should change the title and keywords on each page instead of the same one throughout. Get you a lil se some some. The site looks really good though, i like the design, just need a few tweaks. Grammar. Different title/header. Change blondes to brunettes. If you want you could ad a mouseover to the ads to show the site url only, but whatever you want with that. I'd list it at Foxys with those couple tweaks Brad __________________ Help MrMaryLou Link to his Chubby TGP & Chubby Links on your sites and blogs.