Review request - our first FS

[Star Man]

Thats a SICK looking site dude! It has a real '70's dirty book store' feel to it!(I should know,I worked at one for 5 years.)

A few things though. You might want to create a hub of sorts to build and store your free sites.Buying a domain for a single free site is just nuts.The thing is,free sites aren't really 'free websites' per say.there basicly a series of smaller sites on a single domain.For example my hub Dickheadshit.com is the actual domain and I built a bunch of smaller ' mini sites' in a single directory like this.Just knock of the 'clean.html' off each URL to see the recip version that I submit to link lists.

My hub is a little complicated but you can just point all your 'mini sites' to the index page especially since your building for a single niche.The thing is,free sites are a dime a dozen and your going to want to built a bunch of them to generate traffic to your paysite or whatever your promoting.Hope this helps.

[HappySpanker]

Originally Posted by Star Man

Thats a SICK looking site dude! It has a real '70's dirty book store' feel to it!(I should know,I worked at one for 5 years.)

A few things though...

Thanks so much for the opinions Star Man (and love your page design). You can be sure that this was not intended as a 1-off, eggs in one basket site. We aim to launch 2 pay sites but not before we better 'learn the ropes' and get basic accounts open and active. We have a few other domains we will be using in the spoke & hub logic. So we picked one 'expendable' domain name in our niche. Kinda like wanting to take a small boat out on a lake before just assuming we can blast out of the harbor on a new 40-foot motor cruiser and not drown... heh...

Hope to have the initial pay site done in the next month and 5-10 new free sites & blogs generated by then as well. Maybe then I will be able to afford a designer so we don't start looking like a 70's retro movement... heh...

Whats funny is that none of what we saw as weaknesses on that site were commented on here or from other folks who've reviewed it. Among them I honestly expected people to pee down my neck from using vid caps as stills. Then again, I've this feeling of warm urine coming from somewhere. Prolly from Google, who has hit the site with 3 scans but still not added it to their indexes, even with a sitemap submitted, etc.

[Star Man]

Originally Posted by HappySpanker

Thanks so much for the opinions Star Man (and love your page design).

Oh cool,thanks

Originally Posted by HappySpanker

We aim to launch 2 pay sites but not before we better 'learn the ropes' and get basic accounts open and active. We have a few other domains we will be using in the spoke & hub logic. So we picked one 'expendable' domain name in our niche. Kinda like wanting to take a small boat out on a lake before just assuming we can blast out of the harbor on a new 40-foot motor cruiser and not drown... heh...

Hope to have the initial pay site done in the next month and 5-10 new free sites & blogs generated by then as well. Maybe then I will be able to afford a designer so we don't start looking like a 70's retro movement... heh...

Sounds like you got a game plan,thats half the battle these days.

Originally Posted by HappySpanker

I've this feeling of warm urine coming from somewhere. Prolly from Google, who has hit the site with 3 scans but still not added it to their indexes, even with a sitemap submitted, etc.

Are you sure thats not blood you feel? I dont' know how to tell you this but...your head just fell off (Wait you took down the falling head avatar,my bad... )


Anyhow,google takes a bit of time.Remember,they got a lot of links to sort out.Anyhow,your definitly at the right place to learn and grow! Good luck dude!