What can i do to make this free site better!?

Tobbe · 2004-05-17, 03:10 PM

So what do you think about my work !?.

http://www.pornww.com/freepornsites/...r/7/index.html

bad stuff and good stuff!
out with it peeps!

AdultDesigners · 2004-05-17, 04:00 PM

You can hire us to make a better design for your site |rasta|

Tobbe · 2004-05-17, 04:09 PM

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Originally posted by AdultDesigners
You can hire us to make a better design for your site |rasta|

other then that |rasta|

welcum aboard by the way!

urb · 2004-05-17, 04:11 PM

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Originally posted by AdultDesigners
You can hire us to make a better design for your site |rasta|

That's a really helpful first post then.

Fonz · 2004-05-17, 04:46 PM

That site looks nice and clean to me, you might want to add some catchy sales text to it....

Oh yeah, I rejected your last submission because that template was submitted 4-5 times in the last few days, sorry

urb · 2004-05-17, 04:58 PM

See, that question was best answered by a link list owner.

Ya don't need photoshop to add catchy text.

Greenguy · 2004-05-17, 05:18 PM

The overall design of the site looks fine - you could probably even do a little more advertising on the main page (it looks sorta empty)

Bill · 2004-05-17, 05:27 PM

Your selling is way too passive. I can't see a single reason why someone should buy off your site.

Other than that it's fine, as long as you don't turn it into a repetitive template. It will at least get accepted most places, based on a quick overview.

But it's if anything too LL-friendly. Why throw away the sales potential you are allowed to use?

Tobbe · 2004-05-17, 05:53 PM

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Originally posted by Fonz
That site looks nice and clean to me, you might want to add some catchy sales text to it....

Oh yeah, I rejected your last submission because that template was submitted 4-5 times in the last few days, sorry

No problem dude i have been working on a few other designs now so

Tobbe · 2004-05-17, 05:57 PM

Thanks for all the tips guys i will try to add some more links and tell more about the sites i promote!

dareutwo · 2004-05-17, 06:32 PM

This was listed on Jays today -

I did change the category though -

I guess I'm a bit late to critic though.. LOL

Tobbe · 2004-05-18, 09:51 AM

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Originally posted by dareutwo
This was listed on Jays today -
I did change the category though -

I guess I'm a bit late to critic though.. LOL

No you can never be to late what can i do to improve ?! |rasta|

2004-05-17, 03:10 PM	#1
Tobbe If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: North Sweden Posts: 301	What can i do to make this free site better!? So what do you think about my work !?. http://www.pornww.com/freepornsites/...r/7/index.html bad stuff and good stuff! out with it peeps! __________________ Free Site Business (Add your Linklists, Free Sites here.) ICQ: 474-501-452

2004-05-17, 04:46 PM	#5
Fonz Former pr0n slinger. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Antwerp, Belgium Posts: 7,932	That site looks nice and clean to me, you might want to add some catchy sales text to it.... Oh yeah, I rejected your last submission because that template was submitted 4-5 times in the last few days, sorry __________________ See how I abuse little trees on my Shumi no Bonsai Blog

2004-05-17, 04:58 PM	#6
urb All the way from Room 101 Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,557	See, that question was best answered by a link list owner. Ya don't need photoshop to add catchy text. __________________

2004-05-17, 05:18 PM	#7
Greenguy The Original Greenguy (Est'd 1996) & AVN HOF Member - I Crop Pics For Thumbs In My Sleep Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Blasdell, NY (shithole suburb south of Buffalo) Posts: 41,929	The overall design of the site looks fine - you could probably even do a little more advertising on the main page (it looks sorta empty) __________________ Promote POV Porn Cash By Building & Submitting Galleries to the Porn Luv Network

2004-05-17, 05:57 PM	#10
Tobbe If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: North Sweden Posts: 301	Thanks for all the tips guys i will try to add some more links and tell more about the sites i promote! __________________ Free Site Business (Add your Linklists, Free Sites here.) ICQ: 474-501-452

2004-05-17, 04:00 PM	#2
AdultDesigners Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: May 2004 Posts: 1	You can hire us to make a better design for your site \|rasta\|

2004-05-17, 05:27 PM	#8
Bill Selling porn allows me to stay in a constant state of Bliss - ain't that a trip! Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,914	Your selling is way too passive. I can't see a single reason why someone should buy off your site. Other than that it's fine, as long as you don't turn it into a repetitive template. It will at least get accepted most places, based on a quick overview. But it's if anything too LL-friendly. Why throw away the sales potential you are allowed to use?

2004-05-17, 06:32 PM	#11
dareutwo You can't disprove anything with evidence that doesn't exist Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: NW Minnesota - pop 865 +/- 1 Posts: 2,038	This was listed on Jays today - I did change the category though - I guess I'm a bit late to critic though.. LOL __________________ This is me Mark's-Links