Before I go mad producing Freesites can I have a review..

cjmag · 2006-02-17, 08:48 AM

Hi guys,

As the title says, before I go mad producing Freesites I think I should get some constructive criticism of these sites.....

http://pornbabesonline.com/pantyhose/index.html

http://pornbabesonline.com/cheaters/index.html

Thanks in advance.....and I have thick skin so no need to be gentle

CJ

swedguy · 2006-02-17, 09:01 AM

Hi cjmag and welcome

http://pornbabesonline.com/pantyhose/index.html
Index
* Evidence Cleaner ad - instant rejection from me.
* Webmaster link. What's the point? Aren't you selling porn to surfers?
* 4 outgoing links if you count the webmaster link
* I'd also drop the Net Nanny/Cybersitter links at the bottom

Main
* What's the point of the "Gallery Pics" link? You are giving away a shit load of content
* 4 outgoing links - banner, Home link, Pro Solution and Some Different (Gallery Pics maybe at some places)

Galleries
* I can't check the pic sizes since my FireFox stopped showing it for some reason. But the time they took to load and looks, I'd guess 150kB+ which is huge. You can easily get nice looking pics that are ~50kB and 600px on the longest side.

They're nice and clean looking

Ramster · 2006-02-17, 09:29 AM

-Drop the evidence cleaner add
-Gallery 2 on pantyhose site has pics out of order. The last few pics have her dressed again
-Too many links on main page. 2 banners, home and something else. And you do not need 2 links to gallery 1. Drop either something else or home (and home might be a problem as it is a blind link)

Otherwise they are nice sites

cjmag · 2006-02-17, 09:39 AM

Thanks guys!

I have changed the Evidence Cleaner ad and dropped the extra links off the main page.

And I have reduced the size of the pics - they were HUGE!!

CJ

Fonz · 2006-02-17, 09:41 AM

Your pics on page 2 of the pantyhose one are still out of order. Other than that (and the huge penis pills ads

) this site looks fine...

On the Cheaters one:
- your exit link on the index goes to a sponsor program, some LL's may consider this your 4th outbound link..
- again the evidence cleaner banner
- on gallery1.html you have 4 outgoing links, same on gallery2.html

cjmag · 2006-02-17, 09:49 AM

I have changed the order of the pics on gallery2.

I will also tone down the Penis Enlargement ad

Thanks for all your help

If there´s anything else I should be doing please let me know.

CJ

MrYum · 2006-02-17, 10:26 AM

Hey there Cj

Looks like your pantyhose pics are still a bit out of sequence.

Your exit link on both sites goes to what I would consider an adult related site...as it's ways to generate money online. Since it's also a site that generates revenue for you...I'd have to count it as a 4th sponsor link. If you really want to try to generate a few cents with those exit links, I'd suggest you set up a ringtones domain or something completely non adult related to handle the minimal traffic those links get.

Lastly, the text link in the middle of the galleries on your strippers site is a bit blind in that it doesn't really tell the surfer he's heading off to a paysite. Mention the site name...free tour...something to let him know he's leaving your site.

Other than those relatively minor issues...nice looking sites

Halfdeck · 2006-02-17, 02:28 PM

Hey cjmag,

A couple things I noticed:

"http://pornbabesonline.com/pantyhose/index.html" ENTER/EXIT links are barely visible (dark text against dark background).

Pics look slightly muddy at 40KB and 600 px wide. I'd either raise compression ratio, slightly reduce resolution, or both.

"http://pornbabesonline.com/cheaters/gallery1.html"

Some pics are 110kb+, too big for some reviewers.

The pics are vidcaps, though for that niche, it might be okay. If I was reviewing though, I'd have to reject.

Some pages (e.g. main page) look like you just slapped on banners and nav links. No biggie - content is king. Still, you might take a few minutes spicing up your pages so it takes longer for reviewers to get tired of seeing your templates.

Good luck

Mateusz · 2006-02-28, 04:29 PM

Hi, I found one of your sites in my admin today - its breaking so many rules I would normally delete & forget but I see you are trying hard so will try to help (hopefully you wont mind I review it in public)

The site I'm going to comment is http://pornbabesonline.com/freesite/5/
First of all... name & desctiption

Indian Sex. Free Anjali Porn Pics. - keep your site's name 3-5 words (read rules - some LL allow only 3!) & make it one 'sentence' (personally I dont like see dots and periods in name in description), also using word 'free' in name & description IMO is not a good idea.

Hot Indian babe Anjali loves to fuck and suck huge cocks. - maybe she does but what the hell does it have to do with your site?! your description should describe the pics/movies you got on your site

And now the site itself...
1 - name of the site must actually appear on the site
2 - (linking thumbs/thumblike banners to sponsors site is called blindlinking and is forbiden) half of your top banner is linked so it may be taken as blind
3 - sales text on both galleries 'Click here for a free preview of all the action' is IMO a bit blind - if you added pay site name it certainly would look better
---these two are just friendly advice - its not necessary to apply
4 - I dont really recall anyone succesfully promoting pills for men
5 - anjali free content is pretty overused so it may cause additional rejections

cjmag · 2006-03-01, 09:35 AM

OK - all points taken onboard

Thanks

CJ

2006-02-17, 08:48 AM	#1
cjmag Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 7	Before I go mad producing Freesites can I have a review.. Hi guys, As the title says, before I go mad producing Freesites I think I should get some constructive criticism of these sites..... http://pornbabesonline.com/pantyhose/index.html http://pornbabesonline.com/cheaters/index.html Thanks in advance.....and I have thick skin so no need to be gentle CJ

2006-02-17, 09:29 AM	#3
Ramster Life is good Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Ottawa, Canada Posts: 11,867	-Drop the evidence cleaner add -Gallery 2 on pantyhose site has pics out of order. The last few pics have her dressed again -Too many links on main page. 2 banners, home and something else. And you do not need 2 links to gallery 1. Drop either something else or home (and home might be a problem as it is a blind link) Otherwise they are nice sites __________________ Pornstar Legends \| Live Cam Model Shows \| Hungarian Girls Skype: robmurray999

2006-02-17, 09:41 AM	#5
Fonz Former pr0n slinger. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Antwerp, Belgium Posts: 7,932	Your pics on page 2 of the pantyhose one are still out of order. Other than that (and the huge penis pills ads ) this site looks fine... On the Cheaters one: - your exit link on the index goes to a sponsor program, some LL's may consider this your 4th outbound link.. - again the evidence cleaner banner - on gallery1.html you have 4 outgoing links, same on gallery2.html __________________ See how I abuse little trees on my Shumi no Bonsai Blog Last edited by Fonz; 2006-02-17 at 09:47 AM..

2006-02-17, 10:26 AM	#7
MrYum Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Sunny Florida! Posts: 5,108	Hey there Cj Looks like your pantyhose pics are still a bit out of sequence. Your exit link on both sites goes to what I would consider an adult related site...as it's ways to generate money online. Since it's also a site that generates revenue for you...I'd have to count it as a 4th sponsor link. If you really want to try to generate a few cents with those exit links, I'd suggest you set up a ringtones domain or something completely non adult related to handle the minimal traffic those links get. Lastly, the text link in the middle of the galleries on your strippers site is a bit blind in that it doesn't really tell the surfer he's heading off to a paysite. Mention the site name...free tour...something to let him know he's leaving your site. Other than those relatively minor issues...nice looking sites __________________ Porno Flixxx Submissions SOTI Site Submissions Free Porn Resource Submissions

2006-02-17, 02:28 PM	#8
Halfdeck You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: New Haven, CT Posts: 985	Hey cjmag, A couple things I noticed: "http://pornbabesonline.com/pantyhose/index.html" ENTER/EXIT links are barely visible (dark text against dark background). Pics look slightly muddy at 40KB and 600 px wide. I'd either raise compression ratio, slightly reduce resolution, or both. "http://pornbabesonline.com/cheaters/gallery1.html" Some pics are 110kb+, too big for some reviewers. The pics are vidcaps, though for that niche, it might be okay. If I was reviewing though, I'd have to reject. Some pages (e.g. main page) look like you just slapped on banners and nav links. No biggie - content is king. Still, you might take a few minutes spicing up your pages so it takes longer for reviewers to get tired of seeing your templates. Good luck __________________ Success is going from failure to failure without a loss of enthusiasm.

2006-02-17, 09:01 AM	#2
swedguy Vagabond Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 2,374	Hi cjmag and welcome http://pornbabesonline.com/pantyhose/index.html Index * Evidence Cleaner ad - instant rejection from me. * Webmaster link. What's the point? Aren't you selling porn to surfers? * 4 outgoing links if you count the webmaster link * I'd also drop the Net Nanny/Cybersitter links at the bottom Main * What's the point of the "Gallery Pics" link? You are giving away a shit load of content * 4 outgoing links - banner, Home link, Pro Solution and Some Different (Gallery Pics maybe at some places) Galleries * I can't check the pic sizes since my FireFox stopped showing it for some reason. But the time they took to load and looks, I'd guess 150kB+ which is huge. You can easily get nice looking pics that are ~50kB and 600px on the longest side. They're nice and clean looking

2006-02-17, 09:39 AM	#4
cjmag Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 7	Thanks guys! I have changed the Evidence Cleaner ad and dropped the extra links off the main page. And I have reduced the size of the pics - they were HUGE!! CJ

2006-02-17, 09:49 AM	#6
cjmag Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 7	I have changed the order of the pics on gallery2. I will also tone down the Penis Enlargement ad Thanks for all your help If there´s anything else I should be doing please let me know. CJ

2006-02-28, 04:29 PM	#9
Mateusz Screw you, guys. I'm going home. Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Gliwice, Poland Posts: 996	Hi, I found one of your sites in my admin today - its breaking so many rules I would normally delete & forget but I see you are trying hard so will try to help (hopefully you wont mind I review it in public) The site I'm going to comment is http://pornbabesonline.com/freesite/5/ First of all... name & desctiption Indian Sex. Free Anjali Porn Pics. - keep your site's name 3-5 words (read rules - some LL allow only 3!) & make it one 'sentence' (personally I dont like see dots and periods in name in description), also using word 'free' in name & description IMO is not a good idea. Hot Indian babe Anjali loves to fuck and suck huge cocks. - maybe she does but what the hell does it have to do with your site?! your description should describe the pics/movies you got on your site And now the site itself... 1 - name of the site must actually appear on the site 2 - (linking thumbs/thumblike banners to sponsors site is called blindlinking and is forbiden) half of your top banner is linked so it may be taken as blind 3 - sales text on both galleries 'Click here for a free preview of all the action' is IMO a bit blind - if you added pay site name it certainly would look better ---these two are just friendly advice - its not necessary to apply 4 - I dont really recall anyone succesfully promoting pills for men 5 - anjali free content is pretty overused so it may cause additional rejections

2006-03-01, 09:35 AM	#10
cjmag Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 7	OK - all points taken onboard Thanks CJ