Tour Page Suggestions

emmanuelle · 2006-01-31, 09:06 AM

I'd remove the pricing from the index page, let them get hard before reminding them that it's gonna cost them.

Maybe drop the email collector to the bottom of the page, it's too prominent. That real estate is too important for this.

Kill those giant ads at the bottom, or at least make them smaller.

Ramster is right, it's too busy, but certainly has potential. I like the pretty graphics. I think you just need to focus on the purpose of the page, rather than cram everything you're trying to sell onto it.

Good luck!

2006-01-31, 09:06 AM	#1
emmanuelle 0100011101100101011001010 1101011001000000100001101 1010000110100101100011 Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Montreal Posts: 1,441	I'd remove the pricing from the index page, let them get hard before reminding them that it's gonna cost them. Maybe drop the email collector to the bottom of the page, it's too prominent. That real estate is too important for this. Kill those giant ads at the bottom, or at least make them smaller. Ramster is right, it's too busy, but certainly has potential. I like the pretty graphics. I think you just need to focus on the purpose of the page, rather than cram everything you're trying to sell onto it. Good luck!